Friday, December 12, 2008

Hannah Grace by Sharlene MacLaren



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Today's Wild Card author is:


and the book:


Hannah Grace

Whitaker House (January 30, 2009)


ABOUT THE AUTHOR:


Sharlene Maclaren is an award-winning novelist , retired elementary school teacher, wife, mother, and grandmother.

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Product Details:

List Price: $ 9.99
Paperback
Publisher: Whitaker House (January 30, 2009)
Language: English
ISBN-10: 1603740740
ISBN-13: 978-1603740746

AND NOW...THE FIRST CHAPTER:


Sandy Shores, Michigan • August 1903

The minute hand on the nickel-cased Waterbury clock ticked away the seconds as Hannah Grace Kane primped in the mirror. She leaned back and squinted with displeasure when her unruly, rusty-colored curls refused to cooperate, poking out all over like a bunch of broken bedsprings. “Aargh!” she muttered, throwing down her comb and watching it bounce off the wood floor with a ping before landing on the braided wool rug.

“Supper’s almost ready!” wailed the youngest of the Kane sisters, Abbie Ann, from the foot of the stairs.

“Abbie Ann, you’ll damage my hearing,” Jacob Kane muttered.

Even from the upstairs bedroom, Hannah heard her father’s newspaper rattle and sensed that his tone bordered on brusqueness. She pictured him sitting in his plush blue velvet chair, as he always did at six o’clock, the Sandy Shores Tribune spread in his lap, his reading spectacles perched low on his longish nose. “Why is it that at seventeen, you’re still screaming like a banshee?”

“Seventeen, Papa? Have you forgotten that I turned eighteen in May?”

There was a lengthy pause. “Eighteen? Are you sure?”

Her high-pitched giggle drifted upward. “Of course I’m sure, silly. A lady never forgets her age.”

“Well, then, all the more reason to cease with your howling.”

“Sorry, Papa.”

“Besides, Hannah Grace isn’t even eating at home this evening.”

“Oh, how could I forget? That ol’ Stuffy Huffy’s coming to call. I suppose they’ll take a long stroll in the moonlight. Blechh.” Her voice danced with unrestrained sarcasm, and Hannah could only imagine the look of disapproval on her father’s bearded face. “I don’t know what she sees in him, do you, Papa? If you ask me, he’s boring and unfriendly.”

The newspaper crackled. “Abbie.” He heaved a breath, which echoed up through the register. “Doctor Van Huff seems like a nice enough gentleman. There is no call for judging him. And besides, your sister seems to like him.”

“I’m not judging. I’m merely expressing my view on things, which I happen to think is more fact than opinion. Personally, I suspect she just likes him ’cause he’s just about the only eligible bachelor around.”

Hannah bent down to retrieve her comb and sighed in the process. Everyone knew sounds carried faster than a windstorm in this two-story, foursquare structure. Was there no respect? Why, had she wanted, she could have walked to the twelve-inch heat vent in the floor and peered through its narrow slats to give her sister a snarling glower, but she

wouldn’t, for that was exactly what Abbie wanted her to do. All three Kane sisters had played the “spying game” through that heat register as children, but Abbie seemed bent on continuing it till kingdom come.

“Abbie Ann, you mind your manners. Hannah will hear you.”

Well, it’s about time someone thought of that, Hannah mused, thankful for her grandmother’s scolding tone. Helena Kane, Jacob’s mother, had tirelessly tended to the entire family since shortly after the girls’ own mother had succumbed to pneumonia and died just days short of Abbie’s second birthday. “Ralston Van Huff is a fine, upstanding citizen, and you had best show your respect.” Even after all these years in Michigan, her British accent still lingered like a fresh aroma.

“I do, I do,” Abbie insisted. “But he’s always talking about himself and that stupendous medical practice he runs. After a while, one grows downright weary of it.”

Jacob snapped his paper and exhaled noisily. “The man is doing his best to make a success of himself. I would think taking on the task of town physician would require a bit of ambition…speaking of which, shouldn’t you be out in the kitchen helping your grandmother and sister?”

“I’ll second that,” said Grandmother. “Take the napkins out of the bureau, Abbie.”

“Do you suppose he’s a true Christian, Papa?” Abbie asked, ignoring his inquiry.

“Well, I would hope so. Hannah Grace wouldn’t settle for anyone who didn’t claim to have a faith of his own. May I please read today’s news now, Abigail?”

Keeping one ear to the conversation downstairs, Hannah picked up her comb and resumed her hair-styling task.

“I, for one, think Dr. Van Huff is charming.” Maggie Rose spoke up for the first time that evening. From the kitchen wafted her habitually melodious voice—melodious in that she spoke in pleasant tones rather than melodious from a musical standpoint, that is. Sadly, Maggie thought she could carry a tune quite well, but after years of sitting beside her in church, Hannah knew otherwise. “He picked two roses from our garden last week and gave one to Hannah and one to me. I’d call that rather sweet.”

“Oh, poke me with a stick!” Abbie whined. “He should rather have picked flowers from his own garden—or bought some at Clara’s Flower Shop.”

“Abbie Ann Kane, stop being so persnickety,” Grandmother said. “My goodness, what side of the bed did—?”

A deafening scream sounded through the house when something metallic made clanging contact with the linoleum floor.

“My giddy aunt, what a gobblin’ mess we have here! Don’t burn yourself, Maggie!” Grandmother screeched. “Abbie, come in here this minute and lend a hand. Noodles are everywhere.”

“What’s happened?” Jacob asked.

“It looks like a pig’s breakfast just landed on our kitchen floor. Oh, forevermore and a day! Supper will be delayed, I’m afraid.”

Abbie’s uncontrollable giggles lent to the clamor of rushing feet, running water, Grandmother’s stern orders to stop laughing and fetch some rags, and Maggie’s pathetic verbal attempts to vindicate her clumsiness.

From her cushioned bench in front of the vanity, Hannah stifled a smile, glad to be upstairs and away from

the commotion. She leaned forward to study herself in the mirror. After this close scrutiny, her slightly upturned mouth curled into a pout. Grayish eyes, neither true blue nor clear green, stared back at her as she viewed her thin, longish neck and narrow shoulders, pointy chin, square jaw, and plumpish lips. To top matters off, she had a skinny frame with very little up front to prove her womanhood. As a matter of fact, she’d thought more than once that if she wanted to pass as a boy, she could pile all her hair under a cap, if ever there was one big enough, don a pair of men’s coveralls, work boots, and a jacket, and no one would be the wiser.

She thought about her sisters’ attractive looks—Maggie’s fair-haired beauty and Abbie’s dark eyes, olive complexion, and flowing, charcoal hair. Assuredly, they both outshone her pasty features by a country mile, Abbie’s assets originating from their mother’s Italian heritage, Maggie’s coming from their Grandmother Kane’s long line of elegant features. To be sure, Helena was an aging woman in her sixties, but anyone with an eye for beauty could see that with her high cheekbones, perfectly set blue eyes, well-chiseled nose and chin, and remarkably smooth skin, she must have been the picture of youthful elegance and charm.

But where did she, Hannah Grace, fit into the picture? Certainly, she’d inherited her grandmother’s curly hair, but where Helena’s lay in perfect, gentle waves, gathered into a tidy silver bun at the back, Hannah’s crimped and frizzed atop her head like a thousand corkscrews. And nothing she did to tame it seemed to work. She’d even lain her head on an ironing board some years ago, like a sacrificial hen, and allowed her sisters to straighten it with a hot iron—until they came too close to the skin and singed her scalp. The silly recollection made her brow crinkle into four straight lines.

She pulled her shoulders back, dipped her chin, and tried to look dignified in her ivory silk afternoon gown with the button-down front and leg-o-mutton sleeves.

“Hannah Grace Van Huff,” she whispered, testing the name aloud and wondering how it would feel to say it for the rest of her days.

Tonight, they would dine at the Culver House in downtown Sandy Shores, and, afterward, perhaps walk down to the harbor to watch the boats come and go. Along the way, they would pass the closed shops on Water Street and probably do some window gazing. Ralston would speak about his practice and tell her about the patients he’d seen that day—the broken bones he’d set, the wounds he’d wrapped. He would tell her about his dreams of constructing a new building—one that would allow him to relocate his practice away from his residence. Not for the first time, he would mention his hopes for a partner with whom to launch this undertaking, someone who shared his passion for medicine, of course, and had the financial wherewithal to pitch in his fair share. There would be a placard above the door and maybe a more prominent sign in the front yard. They would hire a nurse, of course, and, down the road, a bookkeeper to keep the multiplying records straight.

He would ask Hannah about her day at Kane’s Whatnot, her father’s general store, and inquire as to how sales had gone. She would be vague in her answer, knowing that the details would bore him to tears. Nevertheless, he’d smile and nod, appearing deeply interested, but then quickly resume speaking about his medical practice.

Perhaps Abbie was right in calling Ralston stuffy and boring, if not a trifle selfish, but he had ambition on his side, and Hannah admired that. Even Papa recognized it. Besides, she’d reached the ripe age of twenty-one, and hadn’t Grandmother once said that when a woman reached her twenties, her chances of finding a genteel fellow slimmed considerably? It was best not to listen to Abbie’s foolish musings. What did she know about the subject? Dr. Ralston Van Huff would make a fine catch for any woman.

“Hannah wouldn’t settle for a man who didn’t claim to have a faith of his own.”

Her father’s words circled in her head, almost like a band of pesky mosquitoes out for blood. Well, of course, Ralston had an active faith. She’d met him at a church gathering, after all. True, he rarely speaks about the Lord, but these things come with time and practice, she told herself. One doesn’t grow strong in faith overnight.

As the racket continued downstairs, Hannah proceeded to pile her mass of red curls on top of her head, using every available pin to hold them in place.

“Thank heaven for hats,” she muttered to herself.

Gabriel Devlin tipped his dusty hat at the woman he passed on the narrow sidewalk, then scolded himself for stealing a glance backward after she passed. What was he doing? He was done with women! And he had Carolina Woods to thank for that. No, I can thank the Lord for bringing our impending marriage to a halt, he rephrased in his head.

A horse whinnied and kicked up a swirl of dirt as it galloped by, carrying its rider through the street, a barking dog on its heels. Since stores closed at precisely five o’clock in this

small but thriving community of Dutch settlers known as Holland, Michigan, the dog and horse were about the only sounds he heard as he made his way toward an open restaurant, stepping down from the rickety-planked sidewalk and crossing the heavily trodden, dirt-packed street in the middle of town. He removed his hat and slapped it across his leather-clad thigh, letting loose a cloud of dust he estimated was almost as big as the horse’s. Setting it back on his head of sandy-colored hair, he stepped up onto a slab of newly laid concrete and saw that one entire block of sidewalk looked freshly poured. Evidently the town council had started a beautification project, at least on this side of the street. He surmised the other side would follow, perhaps before the first blast of winter weather.

He passed several storefronts, glanced in a few windows, and then saw something out the corner of his eye that brought his steps to a halt as his gaze fell on the object of interest. Across the street and another block over, a young lad was crawling out from under a tarp that was stretched over the back of a wagon. He put his hands on his hips and twisted his body from side to side, stretching as if he had just awakened from a long nap. Then, he rubbed his neck and looked at the trees swaying overhead. The horse that was hitched to the front of the wagon turned and granted the boy a disinterested glance, then swished its mangy tail.

Wondering what the boy was up to, Gabe feigned interest in a window display, embarrassed to discover that it was laden with feminine wares and frilly garments. Still, he kept up the façade so as not to miss the boy’s next move. With deft hands, he was plundering through the items under the canvas, stuffing things into every pocket, front and back.Hannah Grace  17

Instinct told him to yell at the lad, for surely he was stealing from some unsuspecting citizen, but something held him back—the tattered clothing hanging off his skinny shoulders, the uncombed mop of black hair, the spattering of dirt and grime on his face and arms, and those shoddy-looking boots.

When the little vagabond had filled his pockets with who knew what, he took off on a run down an alley between two buildings, disappearing within seconds like a fox daunted by daylight. Gabe shook his head, vexed at himself for not caring more but feeling too exhausted after his long day’s ride to muster up much indignation. Maybe once he crammed his stomach with beef stew and bread and gave his horse and mule a period of rest at the livery, he’d go looking for him to see if he could figure out his story.

Pfff! Who was he kidding? After a quick bite and a bit of respite, he planned to finish his trip, following the path along the railroad tracks to Sandy Shores, his final destination. There’d be no time to look for a tattered boy who couldn’t have been a day over nine years old.

A few restaurant patrons cast him curious looks when he found a window seat in the smoke-filled room, but most kept to themselves, faces buried in newspapers or hovering over their suppers. They were likely accustomed to summer tourists, although, by all appearances, he probably resembled a bum more than anything else.

Certainly not Sandy Shores’ newly appointed sheriff.

“What can I do for y’, mister?”

He gazed into the colorless eyes of an elderly woman whose hard-lined face, slumped shoulders, and pursed mouth denoted some unnamed trial of the past. Gray hair fell around her stern countenance, straight and straw-like, reminding him of a scarecrow—the kind whose expression would chase off the meanest bull.

“I’ll have a bowl of beef stew and a slice of—”

“Plumb out.”

“No beef stew?”

“You hard o’ hearin’?”

“Chicken noodle?”

“No soup atall.” With hooked thumb, she pointed behind her. “Menu’s back there.”

His eyes scanned the chalkboard behind the counter where someone had scrawled several words with creative spellings: “Chikin liver and onyuns – 50¢; potatos and gravy on beef – 75¢; cheese sanwich – 25¢; pork sanwich on toasted Bred – 35¢; Ted’s specielty – 50¢”

“What’s Ted’s specialty?” He had to ask.

“Fish. You want it?”

“Is it cooked?”

She gave him a scornful look. “What kind o’ lame-brained question is that? ’Course it’s cooked.”

“I don’t know. Some people eat raw fish.”

“Not ’round these parts they don’t. Where you from?”

“Ohio. Columbus area.”

She sniffed. “Long ways from home, ain’t ya?”

He grinned. “It’s taken me a few days’ ride.”

Lifting one brow as if to size him up, but keeping her thoughts to herself, she asked, “You want the fish? It’s fresh out o’ the big lake, pan-fried.”

His stomach had been growling ever since he walked through the doors, and, in spite of the grit and grime beneath his feet, the dark and dingy walls, and the fetid odors of burnt onions and cigarette smoke, he had a feeling this Ted fellow could cook.

“I’ll try the fish.” He smiled at the killjoy, but, as expected, she just nodded and turned on her heel. “Can I have some coffee, too?”

Another slight nod indicated she’d heard him.

“Ohio, huh?”

From the table next to him, a man sporting a business jacket, string bow tie, and white ruffled shirt, lowered his newspaper. A half-smoked cigar hung out the side of his mouth directly under his pencil thin moustache. He removed the cigar and laid it on an ashtray. “What brings you to these parts?”

Always wary of shysters, Gabe examined the fellow on the sly. Experience had taught him not to trust anyone until he’d earned that right. “Work,” he replied.

“Yeah?” The man massaged his chin, and Gabe knew he was getting equal treatment, a careful scrutiny. Suddenly, the stranger reached across the four-foot span that separated their tables and offered his hand. “Vanderslute’s the name. George.”

Gabe stuck out his arm and they shook hands. “Gabriel Devlin. Good Dutch name you’ve got there.”

Vanderslute chuckled. “You’re definitely in Dutch territory. Pretty near half the town, I’d say. Maybe more.” He looked out over the small, dimly lit eatery. “Not Ted, though. He’s English, through and through. That there was Eva, his

aunt. She owns this place, has for thirty years.” He leaned forward. “She comes across as an old crank,” he murmured in hushed tones, “but on the inside, she’s nothing but mush. Known the two of them since I was this high.” He stretched a palm out level with the tabletop. “Used to stop by here on my way home from school. Depending on her mood, Aunt Eva—that’s what everyone calls her—would pass out free cookies. On good days, that is.”

Vanderslute took a sip of coffee, then took a giant drag off his cigar and placed it back on the tray. Gabe felt the tension roll off his shoulders. He glanced out the window and spotted the little ragamuffin again, his lean frame bent over a barrel as he rifled through the garbage within. “Who’s that little waif over there?” he asked.

“Huh? Where?” Vanderslute pitched forward to peer out the smudged glass.

“Oh, him. He’s been hanging around for a few days. He’ll move on. ’Spect he jumped the back of a train coming from Chicago area. Vagabonds do that from time to time.”

“Vagabonds? He’s just a little kid. Hasn’t anyone tried to help him?”

“He runs off every time. Like some wild pup. Some of the ladies leave bowls of food on their doorsteps, and he’ll run and get them whilst no one’s watching, providing some mongrel mutt doesn’t beat him to it.” He laughed, as if what he’d just said was unusually funny.

Just then, Eva brought a steaming cup of coffee to the table and George slid back in place. When Gabe looked out again, the boy had vanished—like some kind of apparition. He blinked twice and shook his head.

Silence overtook the two for the next several moments as George dug into the plate of roast beef and potatoes Eva had dropped off at his table when she’d deposited a mug of coffee under Gabe’s nose. Gabe’s mouth watered, his stomach grumbled. He sipped on his coffee and ruminated about the boy.

“What’s your trade, anyway?” George asked between chews.

Gabe took another slow swig before setting the tin mug on the table. “You ever hear of Judge Bowers?”

“Ed Bowers, the county judge? ’Course I have. I work the newspaper. I’m a line editor, not a reporter, but I read the headlines before anybody else does. I hear he just appointed a new interim sheriff up in Sandy Shores—someone from…” A light seemed to dawn in his eyes. “Ohio.” Gabe grinned. “You wouldn’t be…?”

“You should be a reporter,” Gabe said. “You’ve got the nose for it.”

“You learn, you know. Well, I’ll be. Too bad about Sheriff Tate, though. He was a good man, honest and fair. Heard his heart just gave out.” George shook his head. “The law business is hard on the body. Good thing you’re young. What are you—twenty-four? Twenty-five?”

“Twenty-eight.”

George nodded, as if assessing the situation. “You can handle it. Most of what happens in these parts is petty crimes, but there’s the occasional showdown. Not often, though,” he added hastily. “You watch yourself, young man. You’ll do fine.”

“Thanks. I appreciate that.”

Not a minute too soon, Eva returned, this time plopping a plate of pan-fried fish in front of Gabe. On the side were cooked carrots drizzled with some sort of glaze and a large helping of applesauce. The most wonderful aromas floated heavenward, and his stomach growled in response. “Eva, you are an angel.” He smiled at her and felt a certain pleasure to see one side of her mouth quirk up a fraction and the tiniest light spark in her eyes.

“Pfff,” she tittered. “Go on with you.” She swiveled her tiny frame and hobbled off toward the kitchen, still looking like a scarecrow, but with a little less severity.

As he always did before delving into a meal, Gabe bowed his head and offered up a prayer of thanks to God. Then, he draped a napkin over his lap, knowing George Vanderslute’s eyes had taken to drilling holes in his side.

“You’re a praying man, I see.”

Gabe took his first bite. “I am. I pray about everything, actually.”

“Huh. That’s somethin’.” Seeming stumped, George forked down the rest of his meal in silence, the smoke from his cigar making a straight path to the ceiling.

As much as he would have liked taking his sweet time, Gabe wolfed down his plate of food, thinking about the miles of road that still stretched out before him. If he didn’t arrive before nightfall, he’d have to camp alongside the tracks again, and the thought of one more night under the stars didn’t set well with him.

The image of the mysterious little imp who’d stolen from the back of a wagon, rummaged through a waste barrel, and disappeared down an alley materialized at the back of his mind. Would he be shivering in some dark corner tonight, half starved? Gabe swallowed down the last of his coffee, determined to chase him out of his thoughts.

Protect him, Lord, he prayed on a whim, suppressing the pang of guilt he felt for not taking the time to search for him.

Sandy Shores came into view at exactly a quarter till ten, three hours after he left Holland. It had been the slowest, steepest, and most precarious leg of the entire trip, requiring him to navigate gravelly slopes in the light of the moon. Not for the first time, he thanked the Lord for his sure-footed mule, Zeke the Streak, who could not run if his life depended on it but still had strength enough to pull a redwood from its roots; and for Slate, his dapple-gray gelding, calmly bringing up the rear but possessing the speed of a bullet if the situation called for it.

A cool breeze was coming off the lake, bringing welcome relief from an otherwise long, hot day on the trail. Gabe cast a glance out over the placid lake, amazed once more by its vastness. At first glimpse, one would never suppose its distance across to be a mere one hundred miles; it seemed more like an ocean. Gentle waves licked the shoreline, making a whooshing sound before ebbing back into the chilly depths. The Sandy Shores lighthouse, sitting like a proud mother at the end of the pier, flashed her beacon for incoming fishing boats and steamers.

Electric streetlights lit the way as Gabe turned east off the railroad path onto Water Street, which led to the center of town. On the corner to his right stood the three-story Sherman House, the hotel he would call home until he found permanent housing suitable for his budget, if not for his taste. According to Ed Bowers, who had made all his room arrangements, he had a view of the Grand River Harbor and the big lake from his third-floor window. Nice for the interim, he thought, but not a necessity for my simple lifestyle. He’d grown up in affluence and decided he was ready for humbler circumstances. His father’s money had been well-earned, and it had reaped him warranted respect in the community and surrounding areas. Even so, Gabe couldn’t live off his father’s wealth and still respect himself. Besides, he’d had enough of women pursuing him for his family money—Carolina Woods, for one—and it was high time he moved away from Ohio, where the Devlin name didn’t make such an impact every time folks heard it mentioned. Furthermore, a smaller town meant smaller crimes, he hoped—the kind that didn’t require gunfire to resolve them.

Boisterous piano music and uproarious laughter coming from a place called Charley’s Saloon assaulted his senses after two hours spent with nary a sound, save for Zeke’s occasional braying, some sleepy crickets’ chirps, and a gaggle of geese honking from the lake. Gabe wondered if he should expect a run-in or two with a few of Charley’s patrons.

His eyes soaked up the names of storefronts—Jellema Newsstand, Moretti’s Candy Company, Hansen’s Shoe Repair, DeBoer’s Hardware, Kane’s Whatnot—and he wondered about the proprietors who ran each place. Would they accept him as their new lawman, particularly since the late Sheriff Watson Tate had held the office for well over twenty years?

When he spotted Enoch Sprock’s Livery on the second block, he pulled Zeke’s reins taut. Slate snorted, his way of exhaling a sigh of relief for having reached their destination.

“I know what you mean, buddy,” Gabe muttered, feeling stiff and sore himself. He threw the reins over the brake handle and jumped down, landing on the hard earth.

“You needin’ some help there, mister?”

A white-bearded fellow with a slight limp emerged from the big double door.

“You must be Enoch.”

“In the flesh.” The man extended a hand. “And who might you be?”

“Gabriel Devlin.”

“Ah, the new sheriff. We been expectin’ ya’. Hear your room’s waitin’ over at the Sherman.” They shook hands. “Nice place you’re stayin’ at.”

Gabe grinned. “News gets around, I take it.”

Enoch snorted and tossed back his head. “This ain’t what you call a big metropolis.” He took a step back and massaged his beard even while he studied Gabe from top to bottom. “Awful young, ain’t ya?”

Is this how folks would view him? Young, inexperienced, still wet behind the ears? He supposed few knew he’d been responsible for bringing down Joseph Hamilton, aka “Smiley Joe”—a murderous bank robber who wielded his gun for goods throughout Indiana, Ohio, and parts of Kentucky. His last spree was on February 4, 1901, when Gabe received word in his office via telegraph that undercover sources determined Smiley Joe had plans to rob the Delaware County State Bank at noon that very day.

It hadn’t made national headlines, but every Ohioan had the best night’s sleep of his life after reading the next day’s headlines: Gabriel Devlin, Delaware County Sheriff, Takes Down Notorious Middle-West Bank Robber!

Having watched the entire robbery out of the corner of his eye while pretending to fill out a bank slip, Gabe, who had placed two plainclothes deputies at the door in case the villain tried to escape, confronted him while the deputies aimed their guns. “Smiley! It’s the end of the line for you, buddy,” he said coolly. “Drop the bags and turn around slowly, hands in the air.”

At first, it appeared Smiley would comply. His shoulders dropped and he started to turn. “Drop the bags!” Gabe yelled. “Hands to the sky!”

Other deputies, all placed strategically around the bank, surrounded him. The bank stilled to funeral parlor silence as customers scattered and backed against all four walls, terror pasted on every face.

But Smiley Joe wasn’t one to surrender, and, in a rattled state, he went for the eleventh-hour approach: he drew his gun. Wrong move. Shots were fired, and, when it was over, one wounded customer lay sprawled on the floor, groaning and bleeding from the shoulder, while Smiley Joe Hamilton lay dead, Gabe’s gun still hot from the bullet he shot through his head.

“That’s all right by me, you bein’ young,” Enoch was saying. “Time for some new blood ’round here. ’Sides, any friend o’ Judge Bowers is a friend o’ mine.” A slight accent from the British Isles colored his tone.

“I appreciate that.”

“Want I should take your rig inside and tend to your animals?”

“That’d be mighty nice of you.”

Gabe made a move to retrieve his money pouch, but Enoch stopped him. “You just get what you need out o’ your rig, and we’ll settle up in the mornin’.”

“You have no idea how good that sounds.” Gabe reminded himself to retrieve his carpetbag from the back of the wagon. All he needed was a change of clothes for tomorrow, his shaving gear, a bar of soap, and some tooth powder. Right now, nothing sounded better than a soft bed. Shoot, I might even sleep through breakfast, he mused. Ed Bowers didn’t expect him in his office until mid-afternoon.

Slate sidestepped the two as they went to the back to remove the tarp. When they did, they got the surprise of their lives.

“Wull, I’ll be jig-swiggered. What is that?”

Gabe stared open-mouthed at the bundle of a body curled into a tight ball.

“Looks to be a sleeping boy,” he murmured.

I am still reading this book, but am blazing a trail through it. I am seriously loving it. Sharlene has a fantastic grasp of the "wild west". I enjoy when the main characters start off on the wrong foot in a humerous way.

The way Hannah and Gabe are brought together is hysterical, but what keeps them bound is sad. I am thoroughly enjoying Sharlene's writing. Unfortunately, my reading had to come in spurts last night because it was the last Christmas ER on tv.

If someone is looking for a historical/romance novel for a Christmas present, this would be a great book!

Blessings, Mimi

Tuesday, December 9, 2008

The Christmas Edition by Robin Shope





It is time to play a Wild Card! Every now and then, a book that I have chosen to read is going to pop up as a FIRST Wild Card Tour. Get dealt into the game! (Just click the button!) Wild Card Tours feature an author and his/her book's FIRST chapter!



You never know when I might play a wild card on you!





Today's Wild Card author is:





and the book:



The Christmas Edition – first book in The Turtle Creek Edition series

The Wild Rose Press (November 21, 2008)



ABOUT THE AUTHOR:




In Robin's words:



I am the Special Education Coordinator for Denton County Juvenile Justice Alternative Program. I work with at risk teens from fifth grade through high school. My husband and I have been married for thirty-one years and we have two grown children. The first two years of marriage, Rick and I traveled overseas as missionaries. Afterwards we served as pastors of a church in Illinois. Presently we live near Dallas, Texas. He is in business and I work for the school system. (My husband still makes yearly mission trips to India.)

To date, my literary works include approximately two hundred articles in magazines such as: Guideposts, Live, Lookout, Mennonite, Christian Reader, Decision, Breakthrough and Christianity Today. Other short stories appear in the books: A Match Made in Heaven, Stories from the Heart, The Evolving Woman, and the New York Times bestseller, In The Arms of Angels by Joan Wester-Anderson. Ann Spangler also used one of my stories in her book, Help! I Can’t Stop Laughing. Another two-dozen stories have been published in the Chicken Soup books. One story, Mom’s Last Laugh, was re-enacted for a PAX-TV program: It’s a Miracle. I co-authored a thriller, The Chase, for Revell. My second book, The Replacement, was released in June 2006. The Candidate was released July, 2007. I continue to publish short stories in magazines. Wildcard, a mystery, will be a spring 2009 release. The Christmas Edition releases Nov. 20. The Valentine Edition releases in January 2009.


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Product Details:



List Price: $ 11.99

Paperback: 236 pages

Publisher: The Wild Rose Press (November 21, 2008)

Language: English

ISBN-10: 1601543301

ISBN-13: 978-1601543301



AND NOW...THE FIRST CHAPTER:





December 1



The usual winter blizzard blew into southern



Wisconsin.





Lucy Collins carefully maneuvered her car



through the snow that grew deeper with every gust



of wind. She parked directly in front of her family



owned business, The Turtle Creek Newspaper, just



as her brother, Mike, was making his second pass at



clearing away the snow from the drive with the



snow blower.





“Hey, Mike! Help me carry these inside, will



you?” Lucy called to him as she got out of her heated



car. A sharp wind sucked up her words and nearly



knocked her off balance.





Mike turned off the blower and cupped his hand



around his ear. “What did you say?” His breath



circled around his face in the frigid air.





“Help!” Lucy hollered. She popped the trunk and



pivoted her body in an exaggerated fashion-the way



models do when showcasing prizes on a game show.



She stepped to the other side and waved her hands,



palms up, along the food trays and her mother’s



crystal punch bowl set. Then she flashed her



younger brother her biggest smile.





Mike galloped up to the car just as another gust



of wind, hammered snow at them. “It’s freezing out



here! Even my nose hairs are frozen solid. You go on



in. I’ll get these as soon as I’m finished shoveling the



walk.”





“Thanks.” Lucy gave him a kiss on the cheek. To



keep her balance, she gingerly walked across the



crunchy ice crystals and into the warm building.



Once inside, she tugged off one boot and then the



other, dropping them under her desk. She hung her



coat and scarf on the back of her swivel chair as she



looked around at the decorations of wreaths and



holly. A sprig of mistletoe hung over the empty desk



at the back. That would surely go to waste. Music



played loudly from her dad’s old stereo inside his



office.





Christmas used to be her favorite holiday, but



after a disastrous end to her engagement, a couple of



years ago, this particular holiday now only served as



a dark reminder of broken promises. With prayer



and a loving family, Lucy was ready to start her life



again, which meant buying her own place right after



the first of the year. Working and living with the



same people was often stifling, especially when



they’re her parents.





Lucy’s mom was the cheerleader as well as the



gopher, making sure everyone had what they



needed, whereas Lucy’s father focused persistently



on getting the next edition out and on time.



Each year at Christmastime, however, Harold



Collins took off his publisher hat and donned



something completely different. The weeks wedged



between Thanksgiving and Christmas became about



assisting others. She loved it all and nothing could



ever take her away from this life.





The employees had finished packing up the last



of the boxes from the food drive which were now



stacked neatly, ready to be dropped off at area



shelters. Lucy wanted to acknowledge all the work



they’d done. “For a small cluster of people, we sure



accomplish a truckload of work, fast! These



donations will help many people down and out this



holiday season. Like all the other years we’ve



worked closely together and done a great job.”



Christmas was about unbridled joy but today, try as



she may, she still wasn’t feeling it. Maybe she could



fake it for everyone’s sake. Lucy lowered her head in



modesty and stated, “This is going to be a Christmas



of miracles.”





As if releasing faith into the air, everyone began



to punctuate her words with applause. Right on cue,



Harold Collins stepped out of his office wearing a hat



something like one of the elves might wear. He even



bobbed his head up and down to show off the cluster



of bells that dangled at the tip of the loopy crown.



Lucy couldn’t help but have her first laugh of the



day, along with the other employees.





“I know it’s still over a month until Christmas



but I thought you could use this now,” Harold said as



he produced a fan of festive red and green envelopes.





Squeals of delight resonated as they opened the



envelopes and saw the amount written on the checks



but none was as loud as Ulilla Langston. Lucy’s dad



had inherited her along with the paper when her



grandpa died. Ulilla was a beautiful, black woman



with hair swept close to her head in a French twist.



She carried weight around the place both literally



and figuratively.





“Harold and Margaret Collins,” she crowed, as



her hand fluttered to her chest. “No way can you



afford to give us this.”





“Nonsense!” Harold blustered, and politely



dismissed her words of protest with a wave. “It



should be three times this and you know it! You all



have worked effortlessly and clocked in many



overtime hours in order to get the newspaper out



each week. I am the one who is grateful. Merry



Christmas!”





The bell above the front door jingled as Mike



walked in balancing the punch bowl along with the



holiday trays. “Where do you want these, sis?”





“Let me help with that.” Lucy took the top two



trays. “Take the rest into the break room. I’ll follow



you in.”





Margaret touched the sleeve of Lucy’s cardigan.





“Have you finished our Christmas cards yet?”





“I started a month ago and finally finished them



last night. Not only did I hand write each one, but



the envelopes are addressed and stamped.”





“Which of the photographs did you decide on?”





“I thought I told you that all ready. Never mind,



there’s one in my desk I’ll show you.” Lucy set down



the trays. From the desk drawer, she took a single



envelope and handed it to her mother. “Here, I was



looking for something that would embody a perfect



form of truth when it comes to Christianity.”





Margaret stared at the card. A country church



was nestled into a hillside surrounded on all sides by



fresh snowfall. Above, the sky was brilliant blue.



Lucy looked over her mother’s shoulder. She



scrunched her face, second-guessing her



photographic choice. “Does it look okay?”





“It’s a whole lot more than okay. This is simply



breathtaking and looks professionally done. Lucy,



you should have put your logo somewhere on this



card so people would be aware that you are the one



who took this photograph of our church.” Margaret’s



eyes glistened.





“Not this time. I want people to focus on the



birth of our Savior and the hope He gives for our



lives. Mom, in the past year, I have become more



appreciative of the upbringing you and Dad gave



Mike and me and how you shared your faith which



has now become mine.” Lucy choked back her tears



and touched the silver cross she always wore at her



neckline.





“Those words are the best gift you could ever



give to me.” Margaret hugged her daughter. “I want



nothing more this season than to see you happy.”



Lucy hugged back tightly. “I’m working hard on



that.”





“Lucy!” Mike called from the break room. “I



thought you said you were following me in. I’m



making a mess of things trying to get the food set



up.”





“Ah, I better go rescue the food from Mike and



start the punch.” Lucy picked up the trays. “By the



way, it’s getting worse outside so could you suggest



to Dad that we better let everyone go home early.”





“I will, but right now, I want to lend you a



hand.”





Lucy and Mike uncovered the trays of fruit,



cheese, and crackers. Margaret took her home baked



pastries from the refrigerator and arranged them on



top of doilies set on antique dessert plates. Mike



dumped plastic forks from the box into a basket and



then tore open the plates while Lucy poured the



punch into the bowl and added scoops of sherbet. “I



think we’re ready.”





Once everyone had gathered in the break room,



Harold asked one and all to join hands. Together



they asked for the Lord’s blessing. Then they dug in;



plates were quickly filled with condiments, the



routine appetizers, rolled pieces of meat, decorated



sugar cookies, and cinnamon rolls. That was just for



starters. Margaret kept laying out more and more



food.





Lucy sat at the edge of her chair and sipped her



cup of punch. It was fun watching everyone enjoy



themselves. She closed her eyes and drank in their



laughter. This is what she needed, to be surrounded



by such love and acceptance.





The employees had all worked for her father for



years, so she not only knew their names but their



spouses and children. This is what she loved about



the business. It wasn’t work. It was family. At times



they even squabbled like it, too.





When there were only a few squares of



cantaloupe and crumbs of her mother’s cake left,



Lucy suggested, “Before we go home for the



weekend, let’s go around the room and name one gift



we want for Christmas. No limitations on the gift.



Miss Ulilla, would you like to start?”





The society column woman was clearly pleased



to go first. In her world, this was the correct order of



the universe and she didn’t even try to suppress her



smile. Instead she brushed crumbs from her bosom,



cleared her throat and stood to her feet. “Since Lucy



removed the limitations, what I really want for



Christmas are tickets for a Caribbean cruise under



my tree this year.”





“That’s sounds exciting. I feel pretty confident



you can talk Abe here into going along with you.”



Lucy gave the elderly custodian a wink. It was no



secret Abe had been after Ulilla for as long as she



could remember, but Ulilla always put him off.



Abe stepped right in without being asked, “The



gift I am wishing for is that I can buy those tickets



for Ulilla. One for her and one for me. Separate



cabins, of course.” He turned beet red.





After the laughter died down, Lucy went on to



ask her best friend, “What about you, Monica?”





“I’m hoping for money. Lots and lots of money.”





“Here I thought you’d ask for perfume. The



French kind,” Mike said. His lips curled into a



slow smile. For the first time, Lucy caught



something in the air between her best friend and her



brother and it wasn’t perfume. French or otherwise.





Harold set down his plastic plate with a hollow



thump. “The gift I want this year cannot be found



under my tree.”





“Harold.” Margaret touched his arm. “This isn’t



the time.”





“I think it is, Maggie. After being a family



owned business for the last fifty years, first with my



Papa and now on my own, it’s no secret I want to



keep that other newspaper from coming here. Living



in a small town like Turtle Creek, we can’t



withstand the extra competition. Heck, we can



barely make it as it is. We need to come up with



some ideas of how we’re going to generate more



sales, increase our advertisers and get more



subscribers.” He pulled off his elf hat and lowered



his eyes. His thumb rubbed a finger as he spoke “Or



this might just be the last time we stand together



like this for Christmas.” To everyone’s dismay,



Harold had spit out his worrying words. They spread



across the room.





Lucy frowned. Everything her dad said was the



truth. They all knew it.





“My turn!” Lucy picked up her father’s hat and



pulled it down over her ears. Everyone laughed. “My



Christmas gift is to hire a new editor who will knock



the socks off our readers with his fresh ideas and



perspective!”





“And how will you know this editor when he



comes through the front door?” Carol from



advertising asked.





“Because…” Lucy tapped her chin in thought.



“The man I have prayed for will write with heart.”



Unexpected tears gathered along the edges of her



eyes. The end of her nose tingled. “Anyone who can



move an audience with words is going to increase



circulation which will attract businesses to grab ad



space and make readers buy our paper.” She touched



her cross. I have my faith in you, Lord.





The front door jingled. Monica looked out into



the office. “Hey, guys, there’s an awesome looking



guy standing at the front counter. I believe Lucy’s



gift just arrived. Quick Lucy, say another prayer



while you have God’s attention.”





Lucy walked out of the break room with



shoulders squared, back straight. There he stood.



Tall, with sandy brown hair and wickedly wonderful



eyes. Cherry cheeks, too, thanks to the frosty



weather. His gray eyes were unsettling. He stood on



one foot and tapped one shoe against the other to



knock off the snow. Then he repeated the process



with the other shoe. Monica was right. He was a



looker.





“How may I help you?” Lucy folded her hands



together and placed them on the counter.





“I’m looking for Lucy Collins.” He stared her in



the eyes.





“You’ve found her.” Lucy heard laughter. She



turned around to see the doorway to the break room



was crowded with faces. All eyes were pinned on



them. Of course, she had to put on a good show for



them. Lucy turned back around and faced him.



Feeling cocky, she said, “I know why you’re here.”





“You do?” he seemed startled.





“Yes, you’re here about the ad I placed in this



week’s paper for an editor.”





His chin dropped and he was speechless for a



moment. “You’re…absolutely right. I did see it



advertised.” The man set his briefcase down and



popped it open. He started shuffling around the



inside of it. Papers rustled. Finally, he looked up



sheepishly. He had worried eyes. “I seem to have



forgotten my resume. Not a good way to start a job



interview. By the way, I’m Joe McNamara.”





Lucy shook his hand and then reached under



the counter for an application. She clamped it down



on a clipboard, slipped a pen underneath and



handed it to him. “I don’t need your resume but I do



need to know if you can write. When you’re done



filling this out, I want you to write an editorial for



me.” She slid a blank piece of paper toward him.





“On what subject?” he scratched the end of his



nose.





“You’re the editor so you get to decide.” She



slapped her hand down on the paper.





Joe nodded and then looked around for a place



to sit. He chose a chair from the waiting area. Lucy



watched him as he read the application and then



thoughtfully filled in the blanks. Every now and



then he looked up and caught her staring at him. He



smiled but she quickly looked away.





The Turtle Creek Newspaper employees began



to quickly leave. “Don’t stay too long, Lucy, or you’ll



be trapped in here for the weekend,” Abe warned her



on the way out. For the first time ever, Ulilla was on



his arm.





“I won’t be much longer. I am dreaming of a cozy



fire with hot chocolate.”





“That’s only one of the things I’m dreaming of!”



Ulilla gushed as she plunged through the doorway.



Shocked over Ulilla’s sudden change of heart, Lucy



couldn’t help but stare.





Finally Joe stood to his feet and handed the



clipboard back to her, the pen returned to the same



position as when she had handed it to him. Now it



was Joe’s turn to slide the paper across the counter



to her. Lucy looked at it. Maybe she missed



something. She flipped it over. Both sides were



blank. She looked at Joe quizzically.





“May I?” he asked nodding toward one of the



computers.





“Be my guest.” Lucy granted permission and



then caught her reflection in a window. She quickly



pulled off the Santa hat. Static electricity popped



around her head like a lightening rod. She knew she



was blushing and really hoped he wouldn’t notice.



Lucy watched as his long fingers flew across the



keyboard. Her keyboard. The tips of the fingers hit



the center of the keys with great accuracy. Tap-tap tap



the keys sank and rose again. She was close



enough to see the words without her glasses and



didn’t see any red squiggly lines. At least the fella



could spell.





“Psst!” Monica called from the break room.



Lucy turned around. “What?” she mouthed



silently.





With frantic movements, Monica motioned for



Lucy to come talk to her. When Lucy walked into the



room, everyone huddled around. “We need details.”





Lucy gave a deep sigh happy to oblige. “His



name is Joe McNamara. According to his



application, he’s from Chicago, so I guess he must be



relocating. He’s trying out for our paper by writing



an editorial for me.”





“Good idea,” Harold said while cramming the



last sugar cookie into his mouth.





“Why would he want to apply for a job with us?”



Mike asked suspiciously as he tied the top of a



plastic garbage bag closed.





“That’s easy to answer. We are the best



newspaper in the entire southern lakes region,”



Harold answered shooting bits of cookie from his



mouth like falling stars.





“Yea, right,” Mike panned as he tossed the bag



on top of the other bags.





“You have to start at a small paper and work



your way up to get into a big city paper,” Monica



explained as she slipped on her winter coat. Then



she winked at Mike. “He’s getting his start right



here with us.”





“Whoa, first I have to hire him, and once he



hears what the pay is, he may just hop back on the



Interstate.”





“Finished,” a male voice spoke.





Everyone turned to look. Joe stood just feet



away, holding his paper out.





Lucy hoped he hadn’t heard everything. She



snatched the paper from him and furrowed her brow.





“That was fast.”





“Not when you have something burning inside



that you feel passionately about.”



She held it between her fingers and read aloud.







Saying Goodbye



by Joseph McNamara








What will I ever do without Cafe Books?



Ever since the announcement that the



independent bookseller was going out of business,



I've been a mess. The big chain stores serve a



purpose, sure, but they don't contain the atmosphere



and warmth that emulates from the owners of Cafe



Books. When I walk into their shop, it's like visiting



family. Mr. and Mrs. Myers always greet me and



everyone, with a genuine smile, and when are they



not armed with a recommendation for a new title



they know I'll enjoy? Just for me. They notice me. Me.



Cafe Books is where I first went whale hunting



with Melville and frog collecting with Steinbeck. How



can I forget all the murderous adventures I shared



with my good friend, Mike Hammer, or faced a scary,



yet Brave New World with Huxley? I’ve read more



than books on the leather sofa at Cafe Books. I've



made friends. Lived a million different lives. Cried



countless tears. And have laughed out loud so often,



and so hard, that my stomach still aches from the



memories alone.





How does one say good bye to such a place?





I started patronizing Café Books just off Kenzie



Avenue in Chicago about two years ago. And so when



the owners announced suddenly it would be going out



of business and closing its door yesterday, I made it a



point to stop by.





The room was busy with faithful shoppers who



felt this place was a stabilizing source in their



community. Lexie Jacobson, a 28-year-old hairstylist



scooped up discount novels and a couple of CDs. “I’m



sure going to miss this place,” she said with a shake



of her head. She was not alone with this feeling.





“It’s hard to find bookstores that are not part of a



national chain,” 35-year-old school teacher



Samantha Jones said with a sigh.





The sentiment was expressed again and again by



dozens of patrons.





In the never ending search for bigger and better,



give me the small and unique. Meet me at Café



Books. Help me say goodbye.







No one spoke. Lucy couldn’t take her eyes from



the page. The words evoked warmth and sentiment.



It was more than she had hoped for. He was it. This



was her Christmas gift.





It wasn’t the first sight of him that did it. It



wasn’t the endearing way he drummed his thigh



with the pen when he was nervously trying to figure



out what to write down on his application that



formed her opinion. Nor even his calm manner as he



slid his fingers across her keyboard that made the



difference. It was his words. These words. They were



simple and brilliant. Words that had taken the



breath from her soul. She looked up at him with new



eyes. He got her—yet how could that happen when



they only met minutes ago.





“Wow,” she gulped.





“Well, it was spontaneous.” Joe uneasily tugged



at his collar. “If I had more time, I could have done



much better.”





They smiled at each other as if there was more



to the words that hung in the air. Her mind was



wandering where it shouldn’t. “I need to clarify



something.”





“Clarify away, Ms. Collins.”





“Lucy.”





“Lucy,” he repeated in a sweet tone.





“Um, we can’t afford to pay you much. It’s



obvious you’re quite gifted so I’m not sure we’re what



you’re looking for in a newspaper.”





“The experience is what is valuable here.”





“How much notice do you need to give your old



place?” Harold stepped forward to ask. “The sooner



you can start the better.”





“Dad!” Lucy cut in as blood rushed to her face.





“Ah, my schedule is pretty well wide open, Sir. I



can start as soon as I’m needed, that is if I am hired.



I really don’t need much—a roof over my head



and...a new start.”





Lucy saw it in his eyes. He wasn’t kidding.





“You know, Harold, there is the small apartment



above our garage. Mr. McNamara could stay there



until he finds another place,” Margaret reminded



him.





“I’ll take it,” Joe was quick to accept.





A gust of wind whipped through the building



when Monica opened the door. “Better get a move



on, people. I just heard on the radio that the



Interstate is closed down. The town is pretty well



socked in. It’s time for us to lock up and head for our



homes. I love you all but no way do I want to be



stuck in here with you.”





Everyone went for their coats.





“I better take you home, so I know you made it



safely,” Mike told Monica.





“If you shovel my walk too, there might be a



reward in it for you,” Monica winked as she nudged



his side with her elbow.





“I love rewards.”





“Mike, don’t be long. There are Christmas boxes



in the attic I need for you to get down for me,”





Margaret said following her son out to the parking



lot. “We’re decorating the tree tonight and you can’t



miss it.” She shut the door behind them.





“Ah, is there something you want me to sign? A



contract or something?” Joe asked, quickly looking



from Harold to Lucy.





“I never thought about a contract,” Lucy said,



wondering if they had anything the resembled a



contract.





“We don’t do contracts here. A shake of my hand



is how I operate.” Harold slid his arm down through



his winter jacket and out the opening. “You better



come along with us. You’ll never get back to the city



tonight.”





With a simple handshake, Lucy Collins’ day took



a new direction.


Unfortunately, I haven't gotten to read anything more than the beginning of this book. The last couple of weeks with my girlfriend has been tough. Then we got one of our computer's fixed that we haven't had since last spring and we hooked that up to the computer. All the while I kept meaning to switch back to the old computer with this story in it. What I've read so far I have loved and enjoyed!

As soon as I finish the book, I will post a more thorough review. My copy is .pdf and I've never tried one of those before in a full length novel! One negative I can say about the format is "out of sight out of mind". When there's not a novel sitting on my nightstand or on my bed, I don't think about it.

Please check out the other reviers through FIRST to learn what they thought of Robin's book.

Saturday, December 6, 2008

Faith in Fiction Saturday

Today's question is inspired by a conversation Lilly started over at Book Blogs. What do you think about labeling books as Christian fiction? As you know, the range of spiritual content in Christian books varies tremendously. Some books barely even mention God while others use a lot of Scripture. Do you think Christian fiction books should be in a separate section of the bookstore or library? Do you think this limits who might read these books? Do you have any idea of how they could be arranged differently? And a little off topic but do you have a preference about whether or not books have a lot of spiritual content or only a little?

At my library our books are all lumped together. That's fine by me. It's easy enough to find what I'm looking for. Our library is pretty tiny though.

When it comes to being at a bookstore, I appreciate having a Christian section to go to. I believe that if we're buying a book, we should be able to go to the genre of our choice and find whatever we're looking for. I prefer not having to peruse all the secular books. I guess it does, to a degree limit who reads these books because someone who doesn't read Christian books won't "accidently" end up with it in their purchases. One would have to intentionally purchase a Christian novel.

When it comes to content, if it is labeled a Christian book, I don't mind how much or how little spiritual content is included. I know that the author is going to adhere to a moral and ethical code for a specific audience. I don't have to worry about the content, for the most part. I know that some publishing houses are allowing certain aspects of the secular world (such as sex) into their novels so I think down the road, the secular/Christian line could become blurred. I understand the authors and publishers are using the "excuse" that they're trying to reach the unsaved, well then do it under a different label. This is all MHO. :)

I enjoy both books that have scripture to back up their story line and ones that are there without heavy bible thumping and are simply a good story. I read Christian books for a reason. They're not like secular fiction. I read enough of that in my teen years to last a lifetime. I enjoy a good Christian romance without all the sex. Oh, there's sexual tension, and coming close to crossing the line, but typically the author stays true to our shared beliefs. I love the historical genre of Christian fiction along with chick-lit. I have even started dabbling in Christian fantasy which may seem like an oxymoron, but these talented authors are getting it done! The only type of fiction I've had a hard time with is horror. I just can't tolerate it because I'm a big chicken!

I appreciate Christian authors and the gift that the Lord has given them. I hope Christian publishing houses stay true to their roots and don't allow the line in the sand to become blurred. Christian labels can give the world of readers so much hope and point them to the One who has given them their gift.

Monday, December 1, 2008

6 books to give away in 2 sets

Christmas is on the way so I'm going to be giving away 2 different sets of 3 books. The first I would say is YA fiction. The 3 books are: Infadel (Graphic Novel Book 2) by Ted Dekker, the first escape by G.P. Taylor, and Mixed Bags by Melody Carlson.



Then I have 3 general fiction books: More Pages from the red suit diaries by Ed Butchart (non-fiction), Shadow of Colossus by T.L. Higley, and the yadayada Prayer Group Gets Rolling ~ Party Edition by Neta Jackson.


To enter, just leave your name and email and you must be a US resident. Let me know which set you would like to win or if you want to be entered for both. I plan to have the drawing December 10 so I can mail it before Christmas. To sweeten the pot, if someone signs up to win the books and uses you as a reference in their post, I will give you an extra entry. :) Another way to get an extra entry is to post a link to this contest on your site or blog. If you add a link, let me know. I won't be checking so I'll be going on the honor system. :) Blessings, Mimi

Leave It To Chance by Sherri Sand



It is time for the FIRST Blog Tour! On the FIRST day of every month we feature an author and his/her latest book's FIRST chapter!






The feature author is:



and his/her book:


Leave it to Chance
David C. Cook (May 2008)



ABOUT THE AUTHOR:

Sherri Sand is a wife and mother of four young children who keep her scrambling to stay ahead of the spilled milk. When she needs stress relief from wearing all the hats required to clothe, feed and ferry her rambunctious brood, you may find her sitting in a quiet corner of a bistro reading a book (surrounded by chocolate), or running on one of the many trails near her home. Sherri is a member of The Writer’s View and American Christian Fiction Writers. She finds the most joy in writing when the characters take on a life of their own and she becomes the recorder of their stories. She holds a degree in psychology from the University of Oregon where she graduated cum laude. Sherri and her family live in the beautiful Pacific Northwest.

She's also a blogger! So stop by and say hi to Sherri at Creations in the Sand!

Product Details:

List Price: $13.99
Paperback: 353 pages
Publisher: David C. Cook (May 2008)
Language: English
ISBN-10: 1434799883
ISBN-13: 978-1434799883


AND NOW...THE FIRST CHAPTER:


“A horse? Mom, what am I going to do with a horse?” Just what she and the kids did not need. Sierra Montgomery sagged back against her old kitchen counter, where afternoon sunlight dappled the white metal cabinets across from her. She pressed the phone tight against her ear, hoping she’d heard wrong, as her four-year-old son, Trevor, ate grapes at the kitchen table.

“Miss Libby wanted you to have it. I’d think you’d be delighted, what with the kids and all. You remember Sally, Miss Libby’s daughter? Well, she just called and said it was all laid out in the will. None of their family could figure out who Sierra Lassiter Montgomery was until Sally remembered me from her mom’s church. So she called and sure enough, you were my daughter.” Sierra’s mom tsked into the phone. “Well, you know how Sally is.”

Sierra hadn’t the foggiest how Sally was, or even who she was. She barely remembered Miss Libby from her Sunday school class eons ago.

“She acted pleased that her mother gave you the horse, but I could tell she was miffed. Though what Sally Owens would do with a horse, I’d like to know.” Her mom’s voice was tight and controlled as if they were discussing how to deal with black spot on her Old English roses.

“But I don’t want a horse. You, of all people, should know that after what happened when—” How could her mom even suggest she get a horse? Painful pictures of her childhood friend Molly floated through her mind.

“Honey, accidents like that don’t happen more than once in a lifetime. Besides, Miss Libby wouldn’t have owned a crazy horse.”

Sierra stared out the window where the school bus would soon release her most precious treasures. Her mom never had understood the resounding impact that summer day had made in her life.

“You really need to think of the kids and how much fun they’d have. It’s not like you’d ever be able to afford to buy them one.”

Sierra wished she were having this conversation with Elise rather than her mother. Her best friend would understand the danger she feared in horses, and in her humorous way come up with a sensible plan that would include not keeping the animal.

Her mom, on the other hand, lived life as if she were on one of those moving conveyors at the airport that people can step on to rest their feet yet keep moving toward their destination. As long as everyone kept traveling forward, she could ignore the emotional baggage dragging behind.

“I don’t understand why Miss Libby would give the horse to me.”

“You know how my bingo club visited the Somerset rest home every week? Well, Miss Libby’s been there for years and she always did comment on how horse crazy you were when she taught your Sunday school class.”

“Mom, that was a phase I went through when I was ten and found National Velvet and Black Beauty at the library. I haven’t seen Miss Libby since middle school.”

“Obviously you were special to Miss Libby. I’d think you might be a little more grateful.”

Deep breath, Sierra told herself. “I am grateful.” An errant grape rolled next to her toe. Trevor’s blond head was bent, intent on arranging the fruit like green soldiers around the edge of his plate. Sierra tossed the grape into the sink and considered how to respond to her mom. She was a dear, but sometimes the woman was like dry kindling on a hot day, and one little spark…. “I’m just not sure that owning a horse would be a wise move at this point in our lives.”

The front door slammed and Sierra felt the walls shudder with the thud. The 3:00 p.m. stampede through the house meant it was time to get off the phone and determine how to get rid of a horse before the kids found out about it.

Her mom sighed. “It’s too bad Sally won’t keep the horse at her place for you, but she said her husband wants the horse gone. He wants to fill the pasture with sheep.”

Sheep? A kitchen chair scraped over the linoleum as Trevor scooted back from the table and dashed for the living room. “Mommy’s got a horse! Mommy’s got a horse!” Wonderful. Little ears, big mouth.

Braden and Emory shot into the kitchen, bright eyes dancing in tandem. Their words tangled together in fevered excitement despite the fact that she was on the phone.

“Where is it?” Braden’s eleven-year-old grin split his face, and his dark hair was rumpled and sweat streaked, likely from a fevered game of basketball during last recess.

She held a hand up to still the questions as her mom went on about the sheep that Sally’s husband probably did not need.

“We have a horse?” Nine-year-old Emory, her blonde hair still neat in its purple headband, fluttered in front of her mom, delight and hope blooming on her face.

Despite the fear of horses building deep in Sierra’s gut, her children’s excitement was a little contagious. She wished Miss Libby had willed her a cat.

Sierra ran her hand down Emory’s soft cheek and whispered. “I’ll be off the phone in a minute, sweetie.”

“Can we ride it?” Em looked at her with elated eyes.

Braden tossed his backpack on the table. “Where are we going to keep it?”

The kids circled her, jabbering with excited questions. Sierra rubbed her forehead with the tips of her fingers. “I gotta go, Mom. I’ve got to break some cowboy hearts.”

The kids clamored around her, Braden taking the lead with an arm draped across her shoulder. When had he gotten so big? “Do we have a horse, Mom?” He asked the question with a lopsided grin, a foreshadow of the adolescence that had been peeking through lately. The preteen in him didn’t truly believe they had a horse—he was old enough to realize the odds—but little-boy eagerness clung to his smile.

“That would be yes and a no.”

“What? Mom!” he complained.

“I was given a horse, but we’re not going to keep him.” Braden’s arm slid off her shoulder, a scowl replacing his smile. “Why not?”

“Someone gave you a horse?” Emory ignored her brother’s attitude and flashed her most persuasive grin. “Can we keep him? Please!”

Sierra smoothed her hand over the silky hair and leaned close to her daughter’s face as Emory went on. “I think we should get four horses so we each have one. We could go trail riding. Cameron’s mom has horses, and they go riding all the time as a family.”

“We’re not a family anymore,” Braden cut in. “We stopped being a family when mom divorced dad.”

A shard of pain drove into Sierra’s gut. She hadn’t had time to brace for that one. Braden’s anger at the divorce had been building like an old steam engine lately.

“That’s not fair!” Outrage darkened Emory’s features. “It’s not Mom’s fault!”

Sarcasm colored Braden’s voice. “Oh, so it’s all Dad’s fault?”

Sierra saw the confusion that swept over her daughter’s face. She was fiercely loyal to both parents and didn’t know how to defend them against each other.

Sierra spoke in a firm tone. “Braden, that’s enough!”

He scowled at her again. “Whatever.”

Sierra held his gaze until he glanced away.

“Guys, we’re not going to play the blame game. We have plenty to be thankful for, and that’s what is important.”

Braden’s attitude kept pouring it on. “Boy, and we have so much. Spaghetti for dinner every other night.”

“So what, Braden-Maden!” Emory made a face and stuck her tongue out at him.

“No more fighting or you two can go to your rooms.” Her kids were not perfect, but they used to like each other. Something had changed. Her gut said it was her ex-husband, Michael, but what if she was falling into the whole “blame the dad” thing herself? What if she was really the problem? Two weeks without a job had added stress and worry. Had she stopped hugging them as often in between scouring the want ads and trying to manage a home and bills?

“Mom?” There was a quaver in Trevor’s soft voice.

“Yes, honey?” Sierra gave him a gentle smile.

“Can we keep the horse?”

Emory’s blue gaze darted to meet hers, a plea in them. Braden sat with his arms crossed over his chest, but his ears had pricked up.

Sierra looked at them, wanting them to understand and knowing they wouldn’t. “None of us know how to handle or care for a horse, so it wouldn’t be safe to keep him.”

Emory’s face lit up. “Cameron’s mom could teach us.”

“Honey, it’s not that simple. We can’t afford an animal that big. He probably eats as much in groceries as we do, and it would be very expensive to rent a place for him to live.”

“I could mow yards.” Anger at his sister forgotten, Braden turned a hopeful face to her. “We could help out.”

Emory jumped onto the working bandwagon. “Yeah. I could do laundry or something for the neighbors.”

Braden drilled his sister a look that said idiot idea but didn’t say anything.

Trevor bounced in his chair, eager to be a part of keeping the horse. “I could wash cars.”

“Those are great ideas, but they won’t bring in quite enough, especially since it’s getting too cold to mow lawns or wash cars.”

“You just don’t want to keep the horse, Mom,” Braden said. “I get it. End of story.”

“Honey, I’d love for you to have a horse, but when I was young I had a friend—”

Emory spoke in a helpful tone. “We know. Grandma told us about the accident.”

They knew? Wasn’t the story hers to share? “When did Grandma tell you?”

Braden’s voice took on a breezy air. “I don’t know. A while ago. Come on, Mom. We’re not going to do something dumb like your friend did.”

Defensiveness rose inside. “She didn’t do anything dumb. It was the horse that—”

“So because something bad happened to one person, your kids can never do anything fun for the rest of their lives.”

Sierra gave him a look. “Or you learn from your mistakes and help your kids to do the same.”

Braden rolled his eyes at her.

Worry drew lines across her daughter’s forehead. “Are you going to sell him?”

“Yes, Em. So we’re not going to discuss this anymore. You and Braden have homework to do.” At the chorus of groans she held her hands up. “Okay, I guess I’ll have to eat Grandma’s apple pie all by myself.”

Braden grabbed his backpack and slowly dragged it across the floor toward the stairs, annoyance in his voice. “We’re going.” Emory trotted past him up the stairs.

Trevor remained behind, one arm wrapped around her thigh. “I don’t have any homework.”

She squatted and pulled him in for a hug. “Nope, you sure don’t, bud.”

He leaned back. “Do I get a horse?”

Sierra distracted him by inching her fingers up his ribs. “What, Trev?”

He tried to talk around his giggles. “Do I get—Mom!” Her fingers found the tickle spots under his arms and he laughed, his eyes squinted shut and mouth opened wide. She found all his giggle spots, then turned on Sesame Street as the second distraction. Good old Bert and Ernie.

Now what? She had roughly forty-five minutes to figure out how she was going to get rid of a horse and not be a complete zero in her kids’ eyes.

She eyed the phone and made her next move. Five minutes later a white Mazda whipped into her driveway. Sierra hurried out the front door waving her arms to stop Elise before she could start her ritual honking for the kids.

Wide eyed, her platinum blonde friend stared, one long plum-colored nail hovering above the “ooga” horn on the dash. “What?”

“I don’t want the kids to know you’re here.”

Wicked delight spread across her perfectly made-up face. Light plum shadow matched her nails. Tomorrow, both eye shadow and nails could be green. “Let me guess! Mr. Pellum asked you out!”

“Nooooo!” Mr. Pellum was a teacher Sierra and Elise had had a crush on in seventh grade.

“Ummm … you robbed a bank and need me to watch the kids while you fly to Tahiti?”

Sierra gave her a mock-serious look. “Done?”

Elise tilted her head. “Can I get out of the car?”

Sierra glanced toward the house. All was still silent. “Yes, you may.”

Deadpan, Elise nodded and opened the door. “Then I’m done for now.” Her plump body, swathed in a creamy suit with a purple scarf draped across one shoulder, rose gracefully from the small two-seater.

Sierra closed the door for her, then leaned against it. Elise had a way of removing the extraneous and reducing a problem down to the bare essentials. “Elise, I’m in a predicament.”

“Hon, I’ve been trying to tell you that for years.”

Sierra shook her head. “I don’t think you could have seen this one coming even with your crystal ball.”

Elise gave her the spinster teacher look through narrowed eyes. “I don’t think I like the implications of that.”

Sierra held her hands out. “You are the queen of mind-reading, according to my children.”

Elise chuckled. “It’s a good thing I was just headed out for a latte break when you called. Now what’s the big emergency?” She owned a high-end clothing store for plus-sized women in downtown Eugene.

“A horse.”

Elise glanced around as if one or two might be lurking behind a tree.

“A herd of them or just one?”

“One. Full-sized. Living and breathing.”

“I believe I’m missing some pieces here. Is it moving in with you? Holding one of the children hostage? What?”

Sierra breathed out a slight chuckle and tucked a stray hair behind her ear. “You’re not going to believe this, but I inherited it.”

Her friend’s eyes grew wide, emphasizing the lushly mascaraed lashes. “Like someone died and gave you their horse?”

Sierra nodded, raising her brows. “And the kids want to keep him.”

Furrows emerged across Elise’s forehead. “Who is the idiot that told them about the horse?”

Sierra tilted her head with a look that only best friends could give each other.

Elise’s perfectly painted lips smirked. “Moving along, then. Why don’t you keep it? The kids would love it. Heaven knows they deserve it.” She clapped her hands together. “Oh, oh! They could get into 4-H, and Braden could learn to barrel race. That kid would think he’d won the jackpot. Emory and Trevor could get a pig or some of those show roosters.”

Sierra let the idea machine wind down. “I don’t think so.”

“Angora rabbits?”

“No farm animals.”

Elise’s mouth perked into humorous pout. “Sierra, you’re such a spoilsport. Those kids need a pet.”

“A hamster is a pet. A horse is not.”

Diva Elise took the stage, hands on her ample hips. “Don’t tell me you didn’t want a horse growing up. Remember, I was the one who had to sit and watch National Velvet with you time ad nauseam. You’ve said yourself that Braden needs something to take his mind off the problems he’s having at school and with his dad.”

Guilt, a wheelbarrow load of it, dumped on Sierra. “You are supposed to be helping me, Elise, not making it worse. I want to get rid of this horse and …” her eyes dodged away from her friend, “… you know.”

“Mmm-hmm. And still look like Super Mom in your children’s eyes.”

Sierra nodded, but couldn’t find the nerve to say yes.

“Sierra Montgomery, those children have been to heck and back in the last couple years and you’re willing to deny them the pleasure of owning their own free horse because … because of what?”

Sierra stared at the ground for a moment, feeling a tangle of emotions rise within. She let her eyes rest on Elise’s and said quietly, “Fear? Terror? Hysteria?”

A look of puzzlement, then understanding settled on Elise’s face, smoothing away the annoyance. “Molly.”

Sierra nodded. “I won’t put my children in that kind of danger.”

Elise leaned forward and grabbed Sierra’s hands, holding them tight. “Oh, hon. That was a long time ago. Don’t let your life be ruled by the what-ifs. There’s a lot of living left to do. And your kids need to see you taking life by storm, taking chances, not hiding in the shadows.”

“That’s easy for you to say. You were voted most likely to parachute off the Empire State Building.”

Elise gave her a cheeky grin, both dimples winking at her. “We could do it tandem!”

“If you see me jump off the Empire State Building you’ll know my lobotomy was successful, because there is no way in this lifetime you’ll catch this body leaving good sense behind!” Sierra heard the words come from her own mouth and stared at her friend in wonder. “Oh, my gosh. That was so my mom.”

“It was bound to happen, hon.”

Was she serious? “You think I’m turning into her?” Sierra brought a hand to her throat and quickly dropped it. How many times had she seen her mom use the same gesture?

Elise laughed. “You need to stop fretting and just live. We all turn out like our mothers in some respect.”

“All except you. You’re nothing like Vivian.”

“Other than the drinking, smoking, and carousing, I’m exactly like her.”

Sierra lifted a brow. Her mom had rarely let her go to Elise’s house when they were growing up—and for good reason. Elise struck a pose like a fashion model. “Okay, I’m the anti-Vivian.” She gave Sierra a soft smile. “All funnin’ aside, I really think you should keep the horse.”

“I’m not keeping the horse. And even if I wanted to, I couldn’t.” Sierra took a settling breath and stared at the tree over Elise’s shoulder.

“Michael still hasn’t paid?”

Elise knew more about her finances than her mom did. “He paid, but the check bounced again. So now he’s two months behind in child support.”

“Have you heard if Pollan’s is rehiring?”

“They’re not.” Jarrett’s, the local grocery store where she worked for the three years since the divorce had been recently bought out by Pollan’s. They had laid off the majority of the checkers with the possibility of rehiring some.

Elise cringed as if she was bracing herself for a blow. “And the unemployment fiasco?”

Sierra shut her eyes. “Mr. Jarrett did not pay into our unemployment insurance, so there is no benefit for us to draw from. Yes, it was illegal, and yes he will pay, but it may take months, if not years, for various lawyers and judges to beat it out of him.” She gave Elise a tired smile. “That’s the version minus all the legalese.”

“So the layoffs are final, no unemployment bennies, and you’re out of a job.”

“Momentarily. The résumé has been dusted off and polished.” She gave a wry grin.

“I wish I could hire you at Deluxe Couture, but I promised Nora fulltime work. And besides, your cute little buns would drive my clientele away.”

Sierra waved a hand over her jeans and sweatshirt. “Your clientele would outshine me any day.”

“You sell yourself far too short.” Elise glanced at the hefty rhinestone encrusted watch on her wrist. “Anything else I can do for you? Help the kids with their homework? Babysit while you sweep some tall, dark, handsome man off his feet?”

Sierra laughed. “And where is this dream man going to come from?”

Elise gave a breezy wave of her hand and opened the car door. “Oh, he’ll turn up. You’re too cute to stay single. I actually have someone in mind. Pavo Marcello. He’s a new sales rep from one of my favorite lines. I’ll see if he’s free Friday night. You aren’t doing anything, are you?”

“Hold on!” Sierra stepped in front of the car door to keep her friend from leaving. “First, I’m not looking. Second, given my history, I’m not the best judge of character. I’ve already struck out once in the man department.” She pointed to her face with both index fingers. “Not anxious to try again. Third, you just told me I’m turning into my mom, which makes me definitely not dating material.”

A twist of Elise’s lips signaled a thought. “You know, now that I think about it, I believe he has a boyfriend.” She shook her head and lowered herself into the car. “We’ll keep looking. I’m sure Sir Knight will turn up.”

Sierra shut the car door and grinned down at her friend. “And what about finding your knight?”

Elise gave her a bright smile. “Mr. Pellum is already taken. You really need to find a way to keep that horse; it’ll be your first noble sacrifice.”

“First?”

The little car backed up, and Elise spoke over the windshield. “The others don’t count.”

Sierra stared at the retreating car. There was no way she was keeping that horse.



After dinner, Sierra crept into Braden’s room. He sat on the bed intent on the Game Boy in his lap, the tinny sound of hard rock bleeding out of his earphones. She waved a hand and he glanced up. She waited and with a look of preteen exasperation he finally pulled the headphones to his shoulders.

“What, Mom?”

“I just wanted to say good night.”

“Good night.” His hands started to readjust the music back into position.

“I looked at your homework.”

“You got into my backpack? Isn’t that like against the law or something? You’re always telling us not to get into your stuff.”

She crossed her arms. Frustration and worry gnawed at her. “You lied to me about doing your assignment. Why, honey?”

He ignored her and started playing his Game Boy.

She took one step and snatched the game from his hands.

“Hey!”

“I want some respect when I talk to you, Braden.”

His chin sank toward his chest, his gaze fixed on his bed, his voice low. “I didn’t want to do it.”

She sat next to him, her voice soft. “Is it too hard?”

He shrugged. “It gives me a headache when I work on it.”

“Braden, if you need help, I’d be happy to work with you after school.”

He stared at his knees and picked at a loose string of cotton on his pajama bottoms.

“I got a phone call from Mrs. Hamison today.”

His body came alert, though he didn’t look at her.

“She said you’re flunking most of your subjects, and she hasn’t seen any homework from you since school started a month ago.”

He glanced up, his jaw belligerent, but with fear in his eyes.

“What’s going on? I know school isn’t easy, but you’ve never given up before.”

“Middle school’s harder.”

She wanted to touch him, to brush the hair off his forehead and snuggle him close the way she used to when he was small. Back when a hug and a treat shared over the kitchen table was enough to bring the sparkle back to her son. “She thinks we should have your vision tested.”

“Why?”

“She’s noticed some things in class and thinks it might be helpful.”

He shrugged again. “Can I have my game back?”

“You lied to me, son. Again.”

“Sor-ry.”

“You break trust every time you choose to be dishonest. Is that what you want?”

His voice was sullen and he stared at his comforter. “No.”

She touched his leg. “What’s bothering you, honey?”

“I dunno. Can I have my game back?”

She stood up. There was a time for talking and this obviously wasn’t it. “You can have it tomorrow.”

But would tomorrow be any different?



I absolutely loved this book! There were a lot of different facets that really spoke to me because of my own family situation.

I'm a single mom of 4 kids. We have a horse. I'm never sure if I'm doing the right things for my kids.

We meet Sierra, a single mom of 3 kids. Her deadbeat ex-husband is causing a lot of pain in not only her life, but in the lives of her children. I would say anyone reading this book would want to strangle Michael for pretty much the entire book.

There's also Sierra's mom who annoyed me to much I wanted to reach through the book and tell her to "shut up and mind your own business!" My annoyance is much to Sherri's ability as a writer. Ugh, Allie was constantly interfering in Sierra's live and her kids lives. She kept doing things against Sierra's wishes and it made me want to scream. Much to Sierra's detriment, she doesn't have much of a backbone and allows it to continue.

I loved the character of Elise! She's a spitfire for God. The banter between Sierra and Elise is fantastic.

Two other important people in this book are Sid and Ross. Sid is Ross's neighbor and finds ways to bring Ross and Sierra together. With the Lord and Sid, there wasn't much of a chance for the two of them to find a bit of romance, or at least try to find it.

The story centers around a horse named Chance. Sierra has to learn to let go and let God throughout this book. The fact that Chance even remains in the story is by the grace of God. Chance "ends" up being borded at Ross's pasture. Being there creates more nusances than Ross expects (along with Sierra) and you're never sure if it's going to drive them apart or bring them together.

Enjoy this book and absolutely, if there's a horsel over in the family or a friend, this would be a fantastic book for them.

 
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